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>> Monday, August 2, 2010

Make it as sentimentally mushy as you can.

He said. And he smiled.
That killer smile.
The one that always left me wondering
where did oxygen suddenly disappear?
I miss you..
Even if you're sitting right next to me.
I look at you..just a glance
And then..Im unable to take my eyes off you.
While emotions play contact sports inside my brain
Rugby, wrestling, boxing...
You sit there, smiling at me lazily
Blissfully unaware
Of all the injuries.
Sigh...

:-)

5 comments:

Sparkling November 24, 2010 at 2:39 AM  

Sigh...

And again, sigh...

Btw, where have you disappeared? all well?

TC

rainboy March 28, 2011 at 9:51 AM  

hai haay... haha

good one... kahaan ho shaitaan ?

Anonymous April 29, 2011 at 5:10 PM  

fun one,
the tense feel for another soul is vividly captured.

perfect and poetic.

Anonymous April 29, 2011 at 11:36 PM  

the end lines made me smile .. there is a playful feel to this .. nice !

Anonymous May 1, 2011 at 5:21 PM  

pretty elegant work.

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